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fire in my eyes
Posted On 05/28/2008 10:13:36 by vampirequeen69

Fire IN mY eyes 

            &nb sp;               Here I stand

Knife in my hand

The calander reads 14.2.08

Her screams now reduced to fearful sobs

Pictures of him and her surround me

The fires in my eyes melt my frozen stance

 I grip the knife so tight my hand turns white

And in that moment I know what I have to do

I look at her the one who took him a way from me

I slashed her throat with shining blade she took her last choking gasp and body went limp I looked beside here and I saw him screaming why would you do this and I looked at him and said because I love you I grabbed his head and slashed his throat and his body went limp

But still the river of blood wasn’t enough to satisfy me

I thrust the metal into his heart

Then once in her back

I hope they could feel the pain in their death

Now they will know how I feel each passing day

I look at his body

Laying cold as ice on the floor

Covered in a pool of blood

I scream

What had I done

The hatred controlled me

I have killed someone

Panic settled in around me

Paranoia seeped into my head

Instead of fleeing

I took the stained knife

I wasn’t afraid

I knew it would hurt

I looked briefly at the knife then

Lunged it into my heart but I felt no pain

My heart had been broken long before that night.

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06/13/2008 14:32:19

yeah i love it


Kuen wrote:


This situation sounds more faniliar than I would care to remember




06/13/2008 09:08:30

This situation sounds more faniliar than I would care to remember



06/05/2008 20:37:59

thanks i love it too


Dragonsblood_Venus wrote:


I like this one; I had some of the same feelings and images when a boyfriend left me for someone else.

Isn't revenge fun?




06/05/2008 14:46:10

I like this one; I had some of the same feelings and images when a boyfriend left me for someone else.

Isn't revenge fun?



06/03/2008 09:34:22


thanks did u like the other one or was it a little to emo


spikelover101 wrote:


that was a great poem




06/02/2008 16:19:52

that was a great poem



05/30/2008 10:32:45


theringinreturn wrote:


damm woman you know how to make a man blush i've never heard anything so beautiful and yet somehow arousing eh?





thanks dude



05/30/2008 10:28:39

damm woman you know how to make a man blush i've never heard anything so beautiful and yet somehow arousing eh?




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